Unshakeable Pursuit by Camy Tang
It’s nowhere as unshakable as the title claims, but it’s okay.

It’s nowhere as unshakable as the title claims, but it’s okay.

The plot of this story is basically the hero pointing at the heroine and screeching, “NO U KILLED KENNY!!!!”

She’s a baby, he’s 300, and it’s love at first sight.

Dear Satan and Xenu and God on high, the “humor” in this thing…

It’s set in a different planet in a different time, populated by brats from a present-day sitcom. Wait, what?

It’s a dude and a witch in love and war, well, except all the love and war thing being over before anything big can happen.

I think everyone in this story is on some hard drugs.

Takedown? Try a pile-up, as the only way for the heroine is shrieking cray cray.

All those stupid nicknames for the heroine need to stop.

Abundant overuse of stale tropes and issues makes this one a deniable commodity.
