Private Pleasures by Bertrice Small
The author’s transition to erotica author is off on a bumpy start,
The author’s transition to erotica author is off on a bumpy start,
This one really doesn’t know what it is supposed to be.
This one starts out pretty good, but you know how it is. Good times never last.
Three times the horror that is bad erotic stories, all for your edification.
Don’t read this one on a hot day, or you may just burst into flames.
Ugh, sexy seems to have taken a wrong turn somewhere.
Still trying, I see. Still trying.
I need to come up if that’s what things are down under.
This is a pretty good Brava debut, although the pacing can drag at several instances.
How not to write “sexy”, more like.