This could have been a grand story, but the heroine being a dim bulb spoils the fun somewhat,

The author also has a great book here. Things don’t come together as well as I’d have liked, though.

The hero being a childish twerp keeps this one from coming anywhere near perfect.

This story is like a daytime talk show which has everyone on stage as high as a kite.

This one is just fake and annoying.

This one has a fun hero, but the rest is just a muddled mess.

Some good, some bad.

Career women are bad! They are as bad as prostitutes!

What starts out fun ends up contrived and annoying.