The Chase by Cheryl Sawyer
Some lovely writing doesn’t mask the slow pace and a very passive heroine. Sleepiness intensifies…

Some lovely writing doesn’t mask the slow pace and a very passive heroine. Sleepiness intensifies…

Nobody in this story seems to have any ability to control their humpy urges.

Moron alert! Moron alert!

This is a potentially great story marred by the subpar execution.

This is actually okay, because there is too little plot for the author to mess things up.

The story runs out of steam shortly after the mid-point, and goes downhill fast.

Annoying brats ahead. Run!

A pretty notable debut effort, but I’d want a better heroine.

As usual, the comedy and humor is top notch. The plot, however…

The best things about this overcooked story are the last few chapters.
