Naledi by Robert Bocking
The party is over before it has even started.
The party is over before it has even started.
It’s not an unreadable mess, but still a mess in other unfortunate ways.
Sadly, I’ve read hotter and sleazier from the author. Still, it’s an adventure in its own way.
If the hero and his four friends do a Voltron, he’d be the arse.
Sadly, this widely-acclaimed offering from Amanda Quick is also when the magic starts to fizzle for me.
Once I loved the author’s stuff… once.
The emphasis is on ‘girl’.
10 years of shame evaporated by a wagging hot wang may not be the best premise for a short story.
The chemistry and the sexy stuff go a long way in elevating this one.
A single oogie for the singularly sodden story.