
Place by Ned White
No, no thanks! I’ll go someplace else…

No, no thanks! I’ll go someplace else…
Two “straight” jocks in a room. Oh, they are so doing it!
Yay, asshole heroes treat heroines like dirt and WE JUST LOVE THEM!
If you don’t mind the fact that the heroine never feels like an authentic outsider, this John Hughes-style romance may be too adorable for words.
This one is too unpolished to be published in its current state.
Purple prose, stilted conversations, the butt being one’s home… oh god.
Even assassins are sweet lambkins in the author’s world.
One story is decent, one is WTF IS THIS CRAP quality.
The characters are already dumb, and the author then goes the extra mile to make them dumber.
This is basically a romance about the undoing the “submissive”-ness of the heroine. Proceed with caution, especially if you don’t think BDSM is wrong.