Time Transit by Kay Austin
Time loops, time hops, time over time.
Time loops, time hops, time over time.
So, how many people are duped into thinking that this is an erotic paranormal story?
No clue what is happening here. Two becomes three?
Two blokes, one chick, and lots of woo-woo. Yes, nothing new here.
What if Mortal Kombat is a porno? Well, here’s the answer!
Yes, I’m a fan. The party has been great so far.
This one feels a little too much like a teen soap opera in space.
Oh dear, this is not ready for publication yet!
Wait, is this supposed to be an urban fantasy, or just a lost Scooby-Doo script?
If this one had been developed a bit more, it’d have been something to remember.