Highland Fling by Tess Mallory
The author has a story that she wants to tell, but a lot seems to have become garbled up during the execution.

The author has a story that she wants to tell, but a lot seems to have become garbled up during the execution.

Unlike the movie of the same name, this one isn’t some weepy tearjerker. Hmm, maybe time travel is not the author’s strongest suit.

Both the hero and the heroine are in a race to see who has the most issues.

Getting back with an ex, who doesn’t change a bit, because of the sex – yes, that will work, absolutely.

The author goes from manipulative to self parody. It’s quite funny.

If this hero had been a woman, he’d be killed off quickly. But he’s a man, so yes baby, we MUST love this asshole.

Ugh, so many subplots for so much space.

A great idea, horrible execution.

More like, dummies for everyone. These people can’t and won’t talk.

The author’s use of English to create this thing is indeed improper.
