What She Deserves by Ellie Marvel
While I like a revenge of the nerds fantasy, this one feels more like the heroine just settling for whatever she can get.

While I like a revenge of the nerds fantasy, this one feels more like the heroine just settling for whatever she can get.

Even this author can get too overboard with the cheese.

This one is an old-fashioned tale of a classically stupid heroine.

This one ain’t pretty, but it sure feels good to read.

Oh look, a heroine who refuses to squeeze the cheating ex-husband in court.

A teenage, surly brat being a Dom? Oh please, don’t make me laugh.

The author doesn’t know old people, or so it seems from this tone-deaf story.

It was going so well until the author remembers which line she is writing for and, hello there, forced sexual situations.

Why do older heroines always fall for unrealistically saintly and boring younger men?

The author is not ready for the primetime, if this unreadable thing is anything to go by.
