Like too many stories about fat chicks who lose weight to score a hot guy, it is too insincere for its own good.

There is really no reason why this story has to be how it is, so the characters end up looking like dummies.

Ooh, this is a fun one. I’m certainly in the mood!

Wait, I thought the author does comedy, not maudlin hogwash?

This one is fun enough to make it a debut effort worth taking a risk on.